Sunday, May 31, 2009

Pleeeeeease?

It's kinda awkward
to go swimming
and see someone
who you once had a thing with
and you're both half-naked
and they ask
for a hug.
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2 comments:

  1. horrorshow122June 5, 2009 at 11:53 PM

    I have to say, the line breaks in this poem are great. It really makes you feel this emotion you were feeling.

    How come its titled "Pleeeeeeeease?"


    Oh shit. I think I added one too many e's in there.

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  2. UnknownJune 6, 2009 at 12:35 PM

    Haha. It's cool.
    And thanks!
    But it's called that because he opened his arms up and said 'Pleeeeeeease?'

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